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READ IF YOU PLEASE!!!!!
... he looks pretty good, i didnt use ANY reference for this. i just drew what i knew about the fit/muscular male body :) :P
NO I DON'T LOOK AT NAKED MEN. unless they are sculptures... like those Ancient Greek sculptures of the male body but this I promise you is what I visualize what the perfect fit male looks like to me.

Thank for viewing~ :icongaaraxneevy:

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:iconraeth:
Handy hint: use reference.

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:icongaaraxneevy:
thank you :)
I'm challenging myself :XD:
I need comments like yours :)

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:iconraeth:
Yeah, I don't mean copy it for final pieces, but do studies. That is, sketching from life and reference, and hopefully it'll sink in for when you do proper pieces like this.

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Machines don't have feelings, and neither does trance.
No dress code - no speed limit - just the euphoric sound of HARD HOUSE.
:icondragonrace:
cool like the body!!

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:icongaaraxneevy:
thanks :hug:

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"Dude your bed is a car!":angry:
"Yeah,but its a fuckin sweet car!":love:
Grandma's Boy :iconimhighplz:
My dragon [link]
:icongaaraxneevy:
i see thanks for the advice :). yeah he was just practice but i'm getting better little by little. like how i used to draw ab's was very tough. could u point out any mistakes in his body? so then I will know whats right and whats wrong in his body :). I definitely need to study the male anatomy more though.. ^^; :XD:

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"Dude your bed is a car!":angry:
"Yeah,but its a fuckin sweet car!":love:
Grandma's Boy :iconimhighplz:
My dragon [link]
:iconraeth:
I thought you'd never ask!

I'm not an expert in anatomy by any stretch, but I do have a few pet peeves. This werewolf only has a couple... the navel is too low, and the pecs are just squares superimposed on the chest. Try integrating them more, since they're meant to be attached to the shoulder muscles and such.

Other than that, I don't see any specific flaws. It's more how you put each par together... it's blocky, like he was carved from a block of styrofoam. The only advice I would give is to look at some anatomy reference... everyone new to drawing does the stiff look, and I only recently got out of it myself. It just takes time and practice, really. There's no magic bullet.

I would say that buttocks don't flare out at the area. In fact, on a male they should be thinner than the hips. On both males and females, the hip-flare is wider than the buttocks, otherwise it looks bulbous and fake.

A good example of how it should look is here [link]
Of course he's much slimmer than your char, but the proportions stay the same.

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Machines don't have feelings, and neither does trance.
No dress code - no speed limit - just the euphoric sound of HARD HOUSE.
:icondragonrace:
anytime!!

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Art rulez:D
Commisson me here the link
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:icongaaraxneevy:
I see what your saying. He does look pretty stiff,I have to work on loosening him up so he can seem much more flexible to the viewer so they can get a better picture of how he would move if he came to life. I know his pecs look pretty weird lol. At least I got the T-shape in his body to go right. I need to smooth out his buttocks. His legs seem okay to me. I know females have curves or the hour-glass shape. I draw females more then I draw males.

I have drawn a few males but this male I drew is for anatomy purposes, he is just a test for when I draw a much more decent male after this guy. I wasn't able to draw the males as good in my early years. I see the other persons example of his character, the buttocks on that character are much more slimmed down/ male-like in proportion to his body. I will be more considering to those flaws in my characters in the future.
really thanks :iconraeth: for pointing out my many flaws in this piece.:) :handshake:

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